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This was a great book, with great writing style and great characters. Michaels did a particularly good job of giving each of the heroes a clear voice. Matt was really snarky and Evan was really grounded. The kids were written well, as were all the other secondary characters. I was invested in this story and enjoyed the ride. This was a fun read and I look forward to reading more from her. My only complaint: I'm kind of anal when it comes to POV. I hate erratic shifting POV - believe me, I know how difficult it can be to be balanced and consistent when writing in third person. But you just have to. You can't spend most of the book from one or two people's POV and then suddenly jump to someone new. To be fair, I actually kind of liked it in this book; she did a good job of getting into each person's head and it was nice to see the story from all of those angles. But it still kind of irked me on that fundamental level, just on principle. There were also some minor grammar errors (mostly punctuation) that probably shouldn't bug me, but I just think if you're writing for money, things like that are inexcusable. This probably won't bother anyone else; like I said, they were very minor. I'm just kind of a grammar Nazi. I'm trying to work on it. :)